The First Moment
Copyright© 2026 by TMax
Chapter 10: Alien
“Beautiful and completely alien,” Nate said as he stared at the stars. “Does anyone recognize any of the constellations?” His shoulder touched mine, and yet neither of us commented.
Nothing looked familiar. I didn’t know the star formations very well, but I could always pick out the Big Dipper or Orion’s belt. I didn’t recognize anything in the star field. Yesterday, I would have said that stars looked random, but after seeing this starscape, I understood how non-random our stars looked. Our stars. As opposed to these alien stars.
I wondered if Sol, our star, existed in the mess of stars.
With his hand on Nate’s shoulder, Shivam said, “No shit, Sherlock, we’re in an alien dome.”
Shivam stared at his feet, partially covered in sand. It looked like white sand from Earth? Did it contain mostly quartz like ours, or some other material? Would we find alien shells mixed in? Just this moment staggered me, and I had to concentrate on my breath, or I would have hyperventilated.
Naked, with only two hundred and fifty other naked humans. I guess two hundred and forty-nine. Lost somewhere in the universe, on an alien world, with alien sand under our feet, alien walls, in an alien dome, under alien stars. No wonder they had such a rigorous selection process. Did they know this would happen? Had they trained the others? Why did they send me without training?
I couldn’t help glancing at my fellow naked humans. Even though they didn’t look normal, because no one looks normal when naked, they at least looked familiarly human. The odd person looked good naked, model good, but that made them stand out more.
Behind me, Alice breathed in short, sharp exhales while she mumbled, “We’re here,” over and over. Not the only one. Most people had similar reactions. A few, like Nate, stared up at the stars with their mouths open. Most stood with their arms tight around their bodies, and focused on their breaths. A military man had curled up in a ball, muscles strained, as he mumbled.
As Alice had helped me back on Earth, I turned and focused on helping her. I wrapped my arms around her shivering body, pressed my cheek against hers, and whispered in her ear, “Breathe. Just breathe. Allow the emotions. Just breathe.”
A few others did the same. Did the administrators plan this? Did the aliens plan this?
“Thanks. I’m ok. It’s just shock,” Alice whispered back as her body stilled, her arms loosened around her body, and she wrapped them around mine.
Skin to human skin, our warmth created a cocoon of comfort, of support. We humans. Together. Against the universe. And in that moment, it felt like we could win.
“Attention: you have arrived. Instructions will follow in two thousand heartbeats,” my mother’s voice, which morphed into my father’s voice, said beside my right ear. I resisted the urge to look to my right. However, a few people around still did. I wanted to feel self-conscious about my nakedness, but in the alien environment and with two hundred and forty nine other naked humans around me, I would have felt awkward with clothes.
Strange how that works.
My fingers went to twist my wife’s engagement ring, but it hadn’t made the trip. This somehow drove home the alienness of this place. I had to close my eyes and count to ten to avoid the panic. Thankfully, Alice’s embrace kept that panic at bay. A pang of guilt caused my heart to flutter and my stomach to turn, but the many counseling sessions helped. Alice helped.
The soldier nearest to us said, in a Russian or Ukrainian accent, “Twenty minutes.” He had tattoos and scars all over his body, with ropy muscles and too much body hair. The other soldiers barked orders at people around them, who mostly followed.
A lean female soldier walked over to the white walls that surrounded us and ran her hand over the surface. Her mouth hung open while she shivered. Another woman joined her and put her arm over the soldier’s shoulders. Tears dripped off the soldier’s chin as she rested her forehead on the wall.
A few people picked up sand, felt it, and let it cascade between their fingers. Watching the sand fall made me realize that gravity felt the same. Or at least close to Earth’s. Again, my heart clenched.
A red-headed male shouted, “This is alien sand. I don’t know what it’s made of. And I should know. I’m an Earth scientist.” A black woman knelt beside him, with her arm over his shoulders, and rested her head against his, while he let sand fall through his fingers.
Around him, a few others nodded while Alice said, “Stupid American, so loud, so obnoxious.”
Two Asian men, who looked like brothers to me, rolled around on the sand, trying to throw punches. Two other Asian men ignored the pair as they stared at the stars. One muttered in an Asian accent, “It doesn’t matter, Wang Wei great powerful.”
I spent time watching my fellow humans as my mind processed the situation. Alien. On an alien world. In an alien dome.
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