A Lovely Fate
by TMax
Copyright© 2026 by TMax
Science Fiction Story: What happens when technology advances faster than life? A sad but hopeful tale.
Tags: Science Fiction Near Future AI Drama Aging
It started with a watch. One of those new-fangled everything super smart watches. It counted steps, measured my heart rate, played music, did emails, and even answered the phone, though I never used that function because it looked stupid to hold my wrist up to my mouth to talk and listen to the electronic voice. The damn thing even made me walk every so often, then it added jogging, and running, and soon I did local ‘Fun Run’ races, while it tracked my daily stress, sleep hours, and all those different stages, and even told me what to eat.
A small, round, bright red thing. I opted for the yellow strap.
The thing cost a fortune but paid for itself within a year through productivity gains, health gains, and all that good for you stuff that you want to do, but forgot due to lack of sleep, poor diet because you just needed some the calories to live as you forgot to eat breakfast again, and the stress from the stupid desk job that made you sit all day and have lunch at your desk. The job that gets outsourced, and within a year, no one remembers that you worked there. Life. The endless daily grind that rubbed your soul away.
But life changed. At first, in small ways. It made me move if I had sat too long. Tweaked my food choices. Added morning walks, then morning runs. Weekend hikes through the forest. Even sent reminders about friends’ birthdays and anniversaries, which allowed me to stay in touch better. The connections reminded me, on my worst days, that I had support and friends, love, and that I didn’t have to suffer alone.
A total miracle, a wonder of modern technology, until a hacker, or more likely, a kid on his phone, bored in class, with an AI, exploited a vulnerability in the watch’s security and changed the software. It took a week before the company noticed, and in that week, my exercise increased fivefold, my sleep fell to only a couple of hours, and the watch didn’t allow me to eat enough.
My heart failed. But the engineer doctors had created artificial hearts. Better ones than the original. More blood throughput. Better oxygen conversion. It even had an impurity filter. Engineering advances not only kept me alive, but they also improved my life. Removed twenty years from my physical self. My run pace increased, and the hikes grew longer. The heart helped me in every way. The sixth best thing to happen to me, up until that point, just behind my two children, one grandchild, and two wives.
The company fixed the software issue, and with my new heart, I did everything faster, better. The heart attack also forced an early retirement, so I had time, so much time, for runs, hikes, kayaking, mountain climbing, until the entropy of the universe wore down my knees and ankles. Arthritis. So one by one, they upgraded my ankles, knees, and hips with better, stronger mono-carbon and titanium 3d printed ones. So much better in every way.
Eventually, even my skin couldn’t keep up, but by then, the bio-engineers had new replacement wraps. The most painful operation, but the fourth-best organ replacement. It allowed me to handle extreme cold or heat with ease, absorb sunlight for fuel, although I still liked to eat, wonderful food, mostly fruit, because of the sweet flavors. With the ability to change skin color and designs, the normals stared until enough of us had the replacement, then it just became another fashion statement. I mostly wore red and yellow, just like my old watch. Some days with swirl patterns, others, just bright red with yellow accents, rarely any other colors.
It took years, but I had years, thanks to exercise, better food, and superior replacement parts, but eventually they replaced most of my body with better parts. The watch became an ocular implant with a connection to the auditory nerve in my right eye, until they replaced that eye with a minicomputer that did everything and more. My left eye stayed original. It never degenerated or failed, which amazed the doctors and their AIs.
Cyborgs, the media called us. Metalheads, the meatheads called us. Advanced humans, we called ourselves, AH for short. Albert, my AI agent embedded along my titanium spine, called me MM, Machine Man, as it said the acronym meant, but I thought of it as Mad Man or Mostly Man.
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