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What could happen next I wonder? What do you think could happen? Is there too much tech? enough dramatic tension?
Chapter 15 is in the queue.
Thank you to the magnificent moderator(s) in their flying machines.
Chapter 9 is in the queue, where the crew of the freighter get their revenge on the pirates. Thank you for the positive ratings! Any errors are entirely mine, and I encourage you to point them out to me.
Thank you to the moderator(s).
I've started posting chapters of my story here. This is my first endeavour here, so I welcome your feedback. I have more chapters to post, once I do a bit of final tweaking. I will likely be distracted in the coming days with family, but more will be forthcoming after that.
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